(Apr25th 2012)The entry below is my English and Chinese entry from a year ago. Now I would like to check it agian if I have any other mistakes yet. So, would you let me know that? Thank you for reading。
--(Apr25th 2011)performing arts-----
Today I came back home very late, because in the evening I went to see a dance。
• Today I came back home very late, because in the evening I went to see a performing arts dance.
One of my friend`s husband bought the tickets for my two friends and me.
• One of my friend's husbands bought the tickets for the three of us.
I'm thankful to him! /
I appreciated the gesture! /
I'm grateful for his kindness!
My friends and I met at a cafe, where we had a simple dinner before going to the theater .
• Two friends and I met at a cafe, we had a simple dinner and then went to the theater.
OoooO~~part of the dance was difficult to understand.
• OoooO~~Some of that dance was difficult to understand.
It`s also not easy to explain this dance performance with my poor English,
I will try to describe it in more simple terms.
but • It's also not easy to explain the dance performance in my poor english, but I will try to explain it very simply.
Em,, tonight at the Deahag-no(대학로), there was a dance performance.
• Em, tonight at the Deahag-no(대학로) there was a dance performance
It was composed of three (separate) dance performances.
• It was composed into three dances.
•In the first dance, four dancers performed.
In the second dance, there were two dancers - a man and a woman, and in the last dance, there were about ten dancers.
• The first dance, four dancer played.
In the first dance, four dancers performed.
In the second dance two dancers, a man and a woman performed.
Finally in the last dance, about ten people performed together.
During the performances, I felt that creating something is really not easy, whether or not it is successful.
• I felt again, that creating something really isn't easy, whether it`s excellent or not.
I took some pictures but I feel tired now, so I would like to go to bed as soon as possible@,@/ I'll be back tomorrow night, and continue to write (in) my Korean journal, upload pictures and recordings.
• I took some pictures but I feel tired now, so I would like to go to bed as soon as possible @,@/. Tomorrow night I will come again, and continue to write, upload pictures, Korean journal and record together.
Bye~ Sleep well! I am so sleepy now,@.@See you tomorrow!*.*/
• Bye~ Sleep well! I am so sleepy now,@.@See you tomorrow!
★ Today pictures: Two baby polar bears (that were) born in January 17th, in a Chinese zoo. Do you like animals?