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Chinese - Mandarin Audio Request

bangbang1
318 Characters / 1 Recordings / 5 Comments

(2011.12.18)下面是昨天的日记。请大家再查看一下,是否还有更自然的表达方式。请多指教!
(2011.12.17)
•我回家了。今天我回韩国了。
•我坐的飞机今天上午11:50在北京首都机场起飞后,韩国时间2:05 着陆[zhuólù]在了首尔金浦机场。
•在飞机上我看了一部法国电影。
•有我今天飞机提供的午餐是牛肉和蔬菜。
•虽然是有点油腻,不过空中小姐提供的辣椒酱使牛肉不腻了。
•在飞机上我通过飞机的小窗拍了几张照片。
•我估计近段时间之内我坐飞机的机会不多了。
•我的儿子来机场接了我们。
•此外,在回家的路上我去了学校拿来了申请参加汉语兴趣班的学生申请表。
•在家门口我受到了betty和Jjang-ah的热烈欢迎。

Recordings

  • (2011.12.17)•我回家了。今天我回韩国了。(2011.12.17)집으로 돌아 왔습니다.오늘 한국으로 돌아 왔습니다. ( recorded by 1580170 ), standard chinese

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Comments

bangbang1
Dec. 18, 2011

(2011.12.17)집으로 돌아 왔습니다.오늘 한국으로 돌아 왔습니다.
내가 탔던 비행기는 오전 10:50분에 베이징 쇼우두 공항을 이륙하여,
서울 김포 공항에 서울 시간 2시5분에 착륙했습니다.

비행기가 하늘에 떠 있을 동안 나는 프랑스 영화 한편을 보았습니다.
그리고 점심으로 소고기 야채로 된 기내식을먹었는데 좀 느끼했습니다만,
스튜디어스가 줌 고추장 덕분에 느끼함을 줄일 수 있었습니다.
비행기가 하늘을 날 동안 자그만한 비행기 창을 통해 사진을 몇장 찍었습니다.
비록 나의 마일리지가 15000포인트가 넘기는 하지만, 앞으로는 비행기를 탈 일이 그리 많지 않을 것 같아서입니다.
그건 그렇고 아들이 마중을 나왔습니다.
집으로 가는길에 방학동안 중국어 취미반을 신청한 학생들의 명단을 가지러 학교에 잠깐 들렀습니다.
현관에서 베티와 짱아의 열렬한 환영을 받았습니다.

bangbang1
Dec. 18, 2011

(DEc 17th.2011)<I retuened to Seoul Korea./I`m home now./ >~I am trying to describe the ways of my returning home by my poor English this time. Please correct my mistakes. Thank you. ~
•I returned home. /I got home now. /I`m home now. /I came home in the afternoon this day. /I came home.
•I returned to Korea. / I returned from China today/thisday.
•The plane which I took lifted from Beijign Shoudu Airport at 10:50 am China time,and it landed on the Seoul Gimpo airport runaway at 2:05 pm Seoul time.
•I watched a French film while the plane was flying.
•I ate beef with vegetables for a plane lunch, and it was a bit greasy.
•The airplane lunch was a beef with vegetables, and it was a little greasy.
•But A hot-pepper that stewardess gave us sauce in a tube, alleviate ?/reudce? / greasy.

bangbang1
Dec. 18, 2011


•I took some pictures with my phone through the small plane window, while the plane was flying in the sky.
•I feel I will not be flying much for a while, even though my mileage points are over 15000.
•By the way, my son came to the airport to pick up us.
•I stopped by school on the way home, in order to take list of children who wanted to join a Chinese hobby class during winter vocation.
•Betty and jjang-Ah welcomed us with a purple passion?/ enthusiastic ?! at the front door.
*Thank you for reading and for your correcting./ Thanks for the correction!)

bangbang1
Feb. 11, 2012

Thaknks so much for help, "1580170"!

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