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大家好！你们正在享受甜蜜的星期天吗？
现在我把昨天的英文日记再改写成中文。
请你们看看后请多指教，修改我错的地方。
谢谢你们支持，帮我修改！　

~~(2010.10.30) 这个星期六/~~~~~~~
这个星期六为了观察种子我带着五年级的孩子们出去. （五年级的活动）
因为天气真的不错，走去教室在外边学习的心情特别舒畅 。
孩子们都在干静而新鲜的空气中，甜蜜而暖洋洋的阳光下感觉特别高兴。
当然我也是！

下班后我跟两个朋友一起去登了小山。
说实话／其实，这不算是登山，而算是散步。
可以和好朋友一起享受散步，这样的小事，对我来说很宝贵，是很值得感谢的。
下山后我们吃了大麦拌饭 。当然很好吃了。
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~~(2010.10.30) This Saturday/ On Saturday/~~~~~~~
This Saturday morning, I went out with the kids for a field trip to observing( look at ) seeds.
The weather was so nice, and it felt great (=we felt great) to be outside!/
The kids had a good time under the clear and fresh fall air and sweet and soft fall sunshine. Sure, I did too!(=Me too)

After work, I climbed a mountain with 2 friends.
In fact it`s not climbing, it`s talking walk./
=In fact it wasn't climbing, but walking.//
=Although it`s not climbing, it`s really walking./ ~~~>(Which is more natural?)
The fact that we could have a good walk with good friends is a very precious thing.
After descending a/(the?) mountain, we had (a? ) dinner by/(of) ‘bibim BoriBab.’( mixed boiled barley).
Sure it was so good eating, very delicious !
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