Correct any mistakes to make it more natural. Natural speed please.
大家好!今天,我在想,我跟你前两天共同的想法。应该有一个游戏,应该帮助你的语法。这就是我认为将是一个语言游戏的想法非常有用的想法之一。这是一个在线游戏是一个好主意。说到语法,如果你需要帮助,你的英语语法你可以问我!
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**Made a few changes for a better flow.**
大家好!今天,我在考虑我和你们前两天共同的想法。
**Tried to make a guess here. The original meaning was not so clear to me. Also, you need to keep the same number. If you say "大家好", you should follow with "我和你们". If you use "你好", "我和你" should be OK.**
应该有一个游戏,可以帮助你的语法。这就是我的一个想法,认为一个语言游戏将会非常有用。
**Again used my guess for "This is one of my thoughts that a language game will be very helpful."**
这个在线游戏是一个好主意。说到语法,如果你需要帮助,你可以问我英语语法。
**Either "你可以问我英语语法" or "你可以问我你的英语语法问题" is OK.**