To be honest, I could barely understand what was being said.
My advice would be to just work on your accent. Try slowing down a bit and speaking clearer.
Could I have a transcript of what you said?
I think I actually caught most of it, but it would be wonderful to have it written out. That would help ME help YOU more!
If you don't mind (:
You definitely have an accent but I would say you could get by with a little more work!
Well, here’s a story for you: Sarah Perry was a veterinary nurse who had been working daily at an old zoo in a deserted district of the territory, so she was very happy to start a new job at a superb private practice in North Square near the Duke Street Tower. That area was much nearer for her and more to her liking. Even so, on her first morning, she felt stressed. She ate a bowl of porridge, checked herself in the mirror and washed her face in a hurry. Then she put on a plain yellow dress and a fleece jacket, picked up her kit and headed for work.