I would like to know if there is someone here who can listen to my recording voice on this page and then you can tell me if my pronunciation is good or not. Also, you can make a recording voice and then I can tell you if your pronunciation is good, more or less.
I think you might be requesting this answer in Spanish, but I'll go ahead anyway, you can ignore me if I've made a mistake (I'm new here).
"I would like to know if there is someone here who can listen to my recording voice on this page (?) and then you can tell me if my pronunciation is good or not. Also you can make a recording voice and then I can tell you if your pronunciation is good more or less."
Well I understood most of it (I think) so your pronunciation can't be too bad. Your accent needs some work but that's normal.
This website is good for checking the pronunciation of words.
http://www.forvo.com/word/pronunciation/#en
However the text should have been:
"I would like to know if there is someone here who can listen to the recording of my voice on this page and then tell me if my pronunciation is good or not. Also you can make a recording of your voice and then I can tell you if your pronunciation is any good."