Note to recorder:
Hello, I would like this text to be read by someone sounding somewhat authoritative (supposed to be a police officer describing a suspect). It is meant to be listened to by ESL kids in their 2nd year. The text could be delivered at a regular speed (not to fast though).Thanks so much!
So, this is our suspect : Mr. Fincher. He is plump and tall. He is one metre ninety-two. He’s got a round face, small blue eyes, short straight fair hair and he wears thin glasses; He hasn’t got any freckles but he’s got a dimple. He looks like his brother Mark. They both have small ears and they haven’t got a beard. Find him and arrest him !
Nothing too wrong with the text, just changed some parts to flow better, in order for a more authoritative voice.