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This document is a report about people addicted to technologies. A solution to this addiction is to go on digital detox (de-tech) holidays. The directors decided to ban blackberries on the beach. The holidays include a life coach and a guide. The life coach gives advice to people in order to help customers to go cold turkey.
At first I thought you were talking about the blackberry fruit! Tu devrais écrire BlackBerry avec la lettre B en majuscules (nom de marque) et ajouter 'devices' pour éviter toute confusion. Ex: BlackBerry devices. . Et les autres 'smartphones', il ne sont pas interdits aussi ? Tu peut écrire: "The directors have decided to ban BlackBerries and other smartphone devices."
Bonne continuation ! -Robert