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English Audio Request

bangbang1
184 Words / 1 Recordings / 3 Comments
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♣Thanks for reading, please correct my mistakes. Thank you! ♣)

(Mar 14th 2012 22:08 ) <My son and his bicycle >
• Just a moment ago, my son returned/came back/ home from work, and had a simple dinner with me.
• Then he went out to ride his bicycle.
• He bought this bicycle last Saturday.
• It's a fairly expensive racing bicycle, so he borrowed some money from me.
• He said that he will make payments on it for the next three months.
• Anyway, he really likes riding racing bicycles. /(= Anyway, he really likes riding this racing bicycle.)
• During the past several years, he was not able to ride because he was serving in the military . Anyway, he finally bought it.
• If he ever gets home early from work, he will probably go riding right?
• I hope, and believe, that he will enjoy riding his bicycle happily and safely.
• Fortunately, there’s a bicycle road along a little stream nearby my house.
• However, I am just a little afraid because it's pretty dark outside now.*The picture of today: My son’s bicycle.(The bicycle of my son.)

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bangbang1
March 16, 2012

(2012.3.14.) 我儿子和自行车
• 刚才我儿子下班回家后跟我一起随便吃了个晚饭。
• 然后他出去骑自行车。
这辆自行车是他上个星期六买的,
这是一种赛车类, 价格比较贵,所以他跟我借了些钱买。
• 他说三个月之内能还给我。
• 不管怎么样他特别喜欢骑自行车。
• 因为他这两年当兵不能骑自行车。
• 现在,终于买了自行车。
• 我估计,以后他下班早的时候,肯定会出去骑车。
• 我希望他会高兴,并且注意安全。
• 正好,我家附近沿着小河有专用自行车路,挺好!
• 只不过,现在外边很黑,我有点担心他的安全。
• 今天的照片:我儿子的自行车
(♣谢谢阅读,请多多指教! ♣)

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bangbang1March 16, 2012 아들이 조금 전 퇴근하여 저와 함께 간단한 저녁을 먹었습니다.
그리고 자전거를 타고 나갔습니다,
이 자전거는 아들이 지난 토요일에 산 것입니다.
경륜용 자전거로 값이 꽤 비싼 거라, 아들은 제게 돈을 좀 빌려서 샀으며, 3개월 안에 갚을 겁니다.
아무튼 아들은 자전거 타기를 매우 좋아하는데, 최근 몇년간 군입대로 인해 타지 못했습니다.
어찌 되었든, 마침내 샀습니다.
이제 앞으로 퇴근을 좀 빨리 하거나 하면 자전거를 타러 나가겠지요?
아들이 앞으로 보다 즐겁고 행복하게 그리고 안전하게 자전거를 타기를 바랍니다.

마침 우리 집 가까이 개천을 따라 자전거 도로가 있어서 다행입니다.
단지 지금이 어두운 밤이라 좀 염려가 됩니다.
(오늘 사진: 아들의 자전거)

Antoinette_
March 19, 2012

Corrections

...he will probably go «riding,right?»
[a pause or 'comma'is needed before «right»]

"I hope and believe..." [no comma before "and"]

"Today's picture: My son's bicycle."
[not "The picture of today: The bicycle of my son.] Why? Because it's 'wordy' and unnecessary.

In English, we try not to use more words than are necessary to express an idea.

bangbang1
March 19, 2012

Antoinette, Thank you for your kindess! ^.^♪

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