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(Aug.8th 2011)♥=> Hi, everyone, how ｈａｓ　 ｙｏｕｒ　ｗｅｅｋｅｎｄ　been? Me? I've ｂｅｅｎ　 just so-so. I didn't write today's English entry. Ｉ｀ｖｅ ｂｅｅｎ　ｃｈｅｃｋｉｎｇ　ｍｙ　Ｅｎｇｌｉｓｈ　ａｎｄ　Ｃｈｉｎｅｓｅ　ｅｎｔｒｉｅｓ　ｆｒｏｍ　ａ　ｙｅａｒ　ａｇｏ． Please check my entries and correct any other mistakes ｔｈｅｒｅ　ｍｉｇｈｔ　ｂｅ．Thank you very much for reading and for your help. Thanks agian. Have a good night! ~bangbang~

=(Agu. 8th.2010.) == How is everyone? This is bangbang. This time I'm writing a journal entry in English. Actually, this is the entry I wrote in Chinese on Aug 05th 2010, so I thought I would try to write it again in English. Of course, I am nervous ａｂｏｕｔ my poor English, but I ｗｉｌｌ give it a try, even if it`s not good. So I just hope that, if you have time, you'll correct my poor English. Please encourage me to learn English.
<<one unique architecture>> Hi,everyone,`ｈｏｗ　ｉｓ　everyone?
Yesterday I couldn`t writｅ my journal entry, because I stayed on a mountain where there was no computer ｏｒ internet 。Ok, I will talk about it next time/later, but first I'd like to talk about a very unique place. Ｌａｔｅ　yesterday night, when I was driving with my husband (or 'when my husband and I were driving'), we found it by chance; it looked so unique, kind of like an ancient castle. The first things that ｃａｕｇｈｔ　ｍｙ　ｅｙｅ　(The things that especially caught my eye) were the driveway at the entrance and the very straight, wide road. It kind of felt like I was being drawn into a great spaceship, so I involuntarily felt tense. Maybe the 3rd picture can help explain ｈｏｗit ｆｅｌｔ. An inexperienced driver (a novice driver / a beginning driver), especially a woman, probably would not (=wouldn't) dare attempt the ascent, I think.
When we passed that place, I asked my husband, "Wow~What is that? A hotel? A restaurant? It looks amazing! So we suddenly felt curious, immediately made a U-turn, and entered that place. I was right! It was a restaurant and　a café.
The most impressive part/feature of the restaurant was the open-air room on the second floor. From there, you could enjoy the seaside 　ｏｒ watch the sunset. The restaurant is on Yongjong Island, where the Incheon International Airport is also located.　We ordered two cups of coffee and a piece of green tea cake.
Even though it was a little expensive, it was still a great time because we could enjoy the great architecture.　I found a sign/notice that said that the restaurant had received the 'Korean architecture culture grand prize'. No wonder ~~~!!!
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http://engdic.daum.net/dicen/search.do?endic_kind=&m=exam&q=encourage+me
I was encouraged to learn because they had promised to help.
나는 그들이 도와주겠다고 약속한 것을 알고 용기를 얻었다.
She encouraged me to leave. 그녀는 나에게 떠나도록 격려했다.
He encouraged me to write poems. 그는 내게 시를 쓰도록 격려해 주었다
You encouraged me. 당신 덕분에 용기가 났다
I found it to be interesting reading, but sometimes the words that were meant to be encouraging did not encourage me.
This does not encourage me to pay too much attention to your opinions.
She kept saying, "Those people do not even know me, and they want to help and to encourage me."
This does not encourage me to believe that she will abide by orders of the court.
All the above is probably true, but it does encourage me in my mission to spread sweetness and light!
Carl, you encourage me to do more reading of good Christian literature!