English Audio Request

It's late Sunday afternoon now
• Now, I am rewriting my entries in English from the day before yesterday.
• One entry was written at noon/ (in the afternoon"), and the other was written in the evening.
• And some of my lang-8 friends corrected my mistakes, and I (have) reorganized them.
• Oh, and I recorded them "in" Korean as well.

---------(((at noon))))-----------
• Hello~~ everyone! I haven't written any entries in English for a few days
• (1)It's been a while, hasn't it?
• (2) How long has it been?
• Yeah~~ I should be regretting the fact that I didn't write.• SooooooOoooo~~?I will try to write again, sooner (/later/sooner or later/ eventually).
• Oh, now I am not home now, I'm at a school in an empty classroom.I'm by myself, it`s such a nice feeling.
• Ok--when I come back home I will try to keep writing this entry.(=When I come back home I'll try to finish this entry.
• byebye~~ see you soon!

----(((in the evening )))---------
• Hi~~ everyone! I came back home. It's evening now.// It is now evening
• Is 19:00 the evening? Or is it night time?
=( Is 19:00 considered evening ? or is it nighttime?)
=( If it isn't evening, is it nighttime?)
• I don`t know well…,(= I'm not too sure....) ....but anyway
•( I am here in front of my desktop)
=( I am here in front of the desk)
=( I am here in front of my desk )
=( I am here at my desk ), wititng an English entry now.
• Yes, now I will go on and write, //
=( Yes, now I will go ahead and write. )
=( Yes, now I will go on writing into the daytime,)
but what will I write?
=( but write about what? )
=( but what should I write about?)
• Okay, I will talk about one of my Lang-8 friend's story.
•(=In her entry she said that she went to see her cousin.)
• Today, she wrote an entry in Korean.
• As mentioned in her entry, she went to see her cousin.
• = (In her entry, she went to see her cousin.)
Her cousin is studying at a university 1000 kilometers away from where she lives.
• Thus she has to take the plane there, and she said, she was a little bit scared to take the plane. =( She was a little bit scared of taking the plane.
• Anyway, she has arrived safely now!
• I hope she will have a good time with her cousin.
•Bye bye~~ see you soon!
•Why? because I will be back to read my Lang-8 friends' corrections.
•=(because I will be back in order to read my Lang-8 friends' corrections).*.*/
Thanks!• Have a good time!