English Audio Request

Title< Memory of a Rainy Summer Night>
Jun 06th 2010 17:50

How can I tell my story in my poor English?
I am afraid that my poor English will give you (lang-8 friends) a headache
sigh! *___*;;;;
But I will try !I will write! bravely!
Maybe reading my journal will take a lot of patience. (OR: You will need a lot of patience to read my journal. )
I'm asking for your consent.^. ^';;;;;

아, 이 이야기를 내 형편 없는 영어로 어떻게 써야 할런지?
내 형편 없는 영어를 읽으려면 여러분 (lang-8친구들) 이 머리가 아파질까 봐 걱정됩니다.
휴유~*___*;;;; 그래도 써야겠지요! 용감하게!
Just a moment ago I read a lang-8 friend's journal.
She wrote about her sister's graduation ceremony,
that day, it rained, but she took off closed her umbrella and walked under the rain.
she said it gave her a good feeling,( OR: she said it felt good.)
so suddenly one of my rainy day memories occurred to
I have quite a few funny rainy day memories
( OR: I have a lot of funny rainy day memories. )
방금 전에 a lang-8친구의 일기를 읽었습니다..
그 친구는 여동생 졸업식에 대해 썼네요..
그날은 비가 왔지만 우산을 접고 빗속을 걸었다고 했습니다..
그렇지만 기분이 좋았다고 합니다.
그래서 갑자기 나도 옛날의 비와 관련된 추억이 떠올랐습니다.
흠….나에게는 비와 관련 된 이야기가 꽤 있지요.
OK! GOOD !
좋아요! 그럼, 이제부터 내 이야기를 해 주겠습니다.
From now on, I will write my story.
I will try to share my rainy day memory with you.
Today, I will not care about my English grammar mistakes.
Therefore, please correct my many mistakes as much as you can.(^. ^
^(Even though there may be many mistakes, I won`t be disappointed, I will keep on writing bravely ^___^// Hahaha~~~ )
( OR: No matter how many mistakes there may be, I will not be disappointed. I will keep on writing bravely.)
나의 비 오는 날 추억을 여러분과 함께 나누겠습니다.
오늘은 문법이 대해 신경 안 쓰고 그냥 쓰겠어요.
(그러니까, 문법이 무척 많이 틀릴 거예요.
많이 틀려도 고쳐 주고 싶은 만큼 고쳐 주셔요!
많이 틀려도 실망 하지 않고, 계속 쓸 거니까요. ^__^//하하))
* Oh, I guess everyone has their own rainy day memory.
(NOTE: "everyone" = singular subject; so you must use singular verb -- "has". Use "have" when you use a plural subject. ex.: The kids have their own special rainy day memories.)
if you have special rainy day memories, would/could you share them with us ?
*참! 여러분 모두에게 비와 관련된 추억이 있을 것 같아요.
만약 있으면 우리 함께 나누는 건 어때요?
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When I lived in Beijing, my friend stayed at my house for 3 weeks.
She was a Korean student, and had been studying for a master's degree.
Fortunately, during summer vacation my son returned to Korea,
my husband went on a business trip.
Therefore, the two of felt very free and comfortable.
내가 북경에 살고 있을 때 내 친구 하나가 우리집에 3주간 같이 있었어요.
그 친구는 한국학생인데 석사 과정을 공부하고 있는 중이었어요.
다행히, 아들은 마침 여름 방학이어서 한국 부모님께 갔고, 남편은 출장 중이어서
우리 둘은 여유로움을 만끽 하고 있었답니다.
One of hot summer evening, it rained heavily.
The pouring summer rain gave me a really nice feeling.
It made me very delighted.
In a summer night, looking through the dark window at the rain falling was Sooooo~~ GREAT!
어느 더운 여름날 저녁, 비가 심하게 내리기 시작했어요.
쏟아 붓는 여름비에 정말 기분 좋아졌어요.
쏟아지는 비는 나는 너무 기분이 좋아졌답니다.
어두운 창 밖을 통해서 여름 밤비는 정~~말~~~ 굉장했어요.
The sound of the heavy rain pouring made me feel so wonderful, it felt like my whole heart and body were washed clean. .
When I was enjoying that sound, I suddenly suggested to my friend to go out to jump and run under the pouring summer rain .
As soon as she answered, we rushed out at the same time.
We jumped, ran and enjoyed a water fight. We looked like kids.
힘찬 빗 소리는 정말 굉장히 좋았는데, 마치 내 마음과 몸을 깨끗하게 씻어 주는 듯 했습니다.
그 소리를 듣고 있다가 갑자기 나는 친구에게 밖에 나가 빗속에서 달리기를 하면 어떨까 물어 보았어요.
친구가 대답하자마자 ,우리응 동시에 밖으로 뛰쳐 나갔습니다.
우리는 아이들처럼 달리고 뛰며 물싸움을 즐겼습니다.
It must have been a really strange sight .
In the dark night, two adult women were having a water fight
Doesn't it seem crazy?
someone must have seen two crazy women in the dark summer night through the window.
Probably they guessed ' How pitiful those women are! –
They are totally out of line.
"They were totally wrong"?
Haha ,~~~ When I think about that time again, I miss that moment. It was so fun.
Waha.......
Time is flying!
Today, she is a mom and already has two kids.

~~It was corrected by 'lalaland'. Thank you very much!~~~~

네, 그건 정말 이상한 모습이였겠지요?
어두운 밤, 두 여자가 물놀이를 하고 있다니, 미친것 처럼 보이지 않았을까요?
분명히 누군가가 어두운 여름밤 창문을 통해서 미친 두여자를 보고 있었을 겁니다.
아마도, 그들은 '얼마나 불쌍하냐?
분명히 완전히 제정신이 아닐거야!' 라고 여겼을겁니다.
하하~~그 순간을 생각하니 너무재미있고 또 그 순간이 그리워집니다.
와`~ 시간이 얼마나 빠른지!
그 친구는 지금 아이가 둘 있는 엄마가 되었답니다.
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刚才,我读了一个lang-8朋友的日记。
她写的是关于他妹妹毕业典礼当天发生的事情。
我在这儿先简单地介绍她的事情, 然后，再写我的回忆（有关下雨的回忆）。
哇～～～　关于下雨我有不少的回忆。
突然一下子想起来了，好想念那些时光啊！
先说说她，
昨天是她妹妹的毕业的日子，所以她没上班，去参加妹妹的毕业典礼。
不过因为挑选鲜花耽误了很多时间，而且又穿着高跟鞋不方便赶路，结果她迟到了很长时间。（很晚才到）
虽然到了学校，不过因为人太多她找不着妹妹。
而且更糟糕的是开始下雨了。
可是她觉得带着雨伞太麻烦，所以干脆把伞收起来开始到处找妹妹。
（她觉得打雨伞太累／麻烦，所以干脆把雨伞叠后开始找妹妹。）
不过按照她的话来说，在雨中走感觉却很好。
过了一会儿，她妹妹的一个朋友突然在身后叫她。
我想这天她们一定玩得很开心

哈哈～～ 这个日记突然让我回想起发生在过去夏天夜里的一段小事情。
哈哈～～这个日记突然让我回头想起来过去夏天夜里的一件小事
。 你们读了以后，说说你们的回忆也挺好！
我想每个人应该都有自己有关下雨的各种各样的回忆吧。

……︿Ｏ︿／
请你们讲讲自己对于下雨的回忆.大家一起来分享吧！
～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～
那么－－现在开始谈谈我的有关下雨有关的回忆吧
（现在开始谈谈我对下雨有关的回忆吧）
我有不少有关下雨的回忆
其中今天说说其中的一个吧。

我住在北京的时候，有一个年轻的朋友（韩国研究生）来我家住了２～３个星期。
当时因为已经开始放暑假了，我儿子回国住在我父母家，我先生又长期出差在外
当时一整天都很热 到了晚上就突然开始下了大雨，感觉非常痛快！
看着窗外的雨我心情痛快极了
哇～～～好痛快呀！
多么痛快地下呢！
ｓｈｕａ　－ｓｈｕａ－－唰－－唰－－下雨的声音真好听真让人心情舒畅！
就像把我心理的杂念全都洗掉的感觉！
这场雨一下子把这一天的热气都化解了

我给我朋友提了一个建议，“我们出去雨里跑步（散步）怎么样？
我们两个女人，竞争地赶紧 跑出去黑黑的深夜里下雨当中。（争相跑进黑夜的雨中。）
跳着跑着，互相向对方踢着水，泼着雨水，太高兴了！
哈哈~~~也许也有人（/别人/人家 ）通过窗户看得见我们两个人蹦跳的样子。
‘那么他们肯定会担心我们起来了
哎呀~~ 她们是不是刚刚从神经医院里跑出来的呀？"
看起来没什么毛病的人怎么会这样？"
真可怜的！！
哈哈~~现在回想起来真有意思！
她，，，，， 现在她也已经结婚，当了两个女儿的妈妈了！

时间----------过得---------真快！！！！！！
阿哈~~~~夏天夜里的梦！
－－－－－－－－－－－－－
好！ 今天是星期天！
大家好好休息吧！
-------written written Bangbang1----------
Ah~~ How can I explain/describe my story by/in/through my poor English?
I am afraid that you(lang-8 friends) should be got a headache caused (/cause? ) reading my poor English.
sigh! *___*;;;;
But I will try ! I will write! bravely!
May be reading my journal needs a lot of patience.
Ask for your consent. ^.^';;;;;

Just moment ago I read a lang-8 friends`s journal.
She wrote about her sister`s graduate ceremony,
that day had rained, but she took off her umbrella walked under the rain.
she said it was a good feeling,
so suddenly it occurred to me my past one memory of raining. /(one of my raining memory? ) .
I have not a few funny memories about raining.

From now I will write, just try to let you know/
Try to share my memory of raining with together,
this day I will not mind my English grammar mistakes.
(Therefore, please correct my many mistakes just as much as you would/can.(^.^(Even though how many mistakes, I won`t be disappointed, will keep on bravely write ^___^// Hahaha~~~ )

* Oh, I guess everyone have own memory about raining.
if you have would/could you share with us together?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
When I live in Beijing, my friend had stayed at my house for3 weeks.
She was a Korean student, and had been studying for a master's degree.
Fortunately, during summer vocation my son returned Korea,
my husband went to business trip,
two of us were felt very free and easy.

One of hot summer evening, it became a heavy rainfall.
Pouring summer rain gave me a really nice feeling.
The pouring rainfall made me highly delighted.
Through of dark window summer night rain falling is Sooooo~~ GREAT!

Pouring heavy rain sound, it made me so wonderful, it looked like washing clean my whole heart and body .
When I was enjoying that sounds, I suddenly suggested her going out for jumping and running under the pouring summer rain' .
As soon as she answered, we rushed out at the same time.
We jumped and ran, had enjoyed water fighting as looks like kids.

I know It must be a really strange sight/(view?) .
In the dark night, two adults women were playing water playing.
Doesn`t seem crazy?
It must be there were someone who saw that crazy two women in the dark summer night through window.
Probably they guessed ' How poor those women are! They are totally out of line. '
Haha ,~~~ when I think about that time view again, it was so fun and missing that past memment.

Waha.......Time is flying!
Today, she is a mom has two kids now, already.