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In the past, in urban areas, men went to work but women stayed home to carry out housework. On the basis of both our culture and our religion it was better for women to stay home to handle family affairs. Nowadays, many women work outside of house same as men. It can be positive, including assisting the family economically, offering more self-importance and independence, preventing depression, and providing more options for marriage.
Today, in the technology era family members' needs have changed. They want more modern appliances, possibilities and welfare. In most families, a man can't afford to supply it .In order to satisfy their needs and overcome economic problems caused by inflation, both man and woman try to work outside the home. As a result, the woman’s income can improve the family to have a better life and guarantee their happiness and success.
When a woman works outside the home, she feels more useful and active both for home and for society. The working environment gives her more social involvement resulting in enhanced senses of self- importance, self – esteem and independence. When she can have her own income she doesn't need to appeal to others, especially her husband, to satisfy her financial needs.
Nowadays, unfortunately a housewife work is not considered as highly as one employed outside the home. Her function and usefulness is ignored. A woman working at home considers herself as a servant. Washing, cleaning and cooking chores at home makes her tired, both physically and mentally. She is financially dependent to on her husband too. All these factors make a woman feel depressed. So, if she goes out to work, to be active and useful in society may decrease her depression.
