Please read the text the way you usually talk to your friend. if the text sounds not natural to your ears, please change it and also use words that you usually use daily.
For example, my friend from Argentina said he would say, como fue instead of come sea capitulo for episodio.
Also if it's possible, please tell me which country and state(region) you are from.
It is for my personal project and I would like to see the different accents from different countries, and regions. This is why I would like to know where you are from.
Thank you so much in advance!
¿Qué? ¡Pensé que podías venir a mi casa a las 7! ¿Por qué llegas tan tarde? ¡Ya he preparado la cena y todo! ¡Deberías haberme llamado antes al menos! ¡Bueno, como sea! Solo avísame cuando estés en camino. Tal vez vea otro episodio en Netflix mientras te espero.
Buenos Aires accent. Note: not really a correction, just changed "he preparado" to "preparé" as it sounds more natural where I'm from.