Hi!
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Hello, my name is Claire and I’m an Australian. I am 22 years old and I live in Sydney, Australia.
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I have a younger brother named Patrick. He is 20 years old, he lives with my mother and father in the Blue Mountains.
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In my free time, I like to go shopping, do sports and go out with my friends.
I do hockey with the school twice a week and I also do tennis with the school twice a week.
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I attend dancing classes every Tuesday and Wednesday for one hour each.
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At the weekend, I go out with my friends to the cinema or shopping, and I have hockey and tennis matches.