Natural speed ,please .
A younger speaker for the young narrator.
On July 4th 2011, my Mum, Dad and I went to Guam for our summer holiday. I remember it vividly because me and my parents experienced many exciting and memorable things for the first time. We tried all sorts of things such as skydiving,sea walking, flying , things that we will always remember. We stayed at the Sheraton – another great experience: our room was a suite. The good thing about it was that it had two rooms ; one room was a bedroom with 3 beds while the second room had a TV, a sofa and a desk. That meant that one of us could read in the first room while the others slept in the second room. There were also two pools, one which was extremely deep and the other had dead bugs in it .
I also learnt and discovered many new things. Guam is unique because although it is very small, it is doing well, thanks to good business opportunities. For example, skydiving is a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity , and when tourists visit Guam, most of them would jump at the chance to try it, such as my mum. This was a big surprise since she is all fingers and thumbs at sports.
My dad was furious at the sight of coloured smoke belching out from a power station and he complained that therew weren’t enough environmentally friendly measures in place, and and I completely agree with him. At the flea market, my mum tasted a new delicacy - coconut sashimi. While flying, I saw that most of the interior of Guam was undeveloped, and I think that the flat land could be used to build holiday villages or ranches where people could ride horses or ATVs.
Overall, my trip to Guam was extremely memorable and I really hope I never forget it. But now summer is over and I am worrying about school. My job. Money. My future. I don’t know whre I am going . Shoud I have a plan by now? I mean, I am a junior in High School. I should have some kind of plan, right?
Great piece! Your English is fantastic! Keep it up! My pleasure to record the audio for you.