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Hello ! I am Oliver from Toronto in Canada.
Today I want to tell you about my favourite actress ! Her name is Evangeline Lilly. Do you know her ? She is a Canadian actress and she comes from Alberta, a state in the west of Canada.
For me Evangeline Lilly is the best actress ever !! She is very talented. She is creative, imaginative, enthusiastic and so clever !
She usually plays in great films like « Antman and the wasp » or « Lords of the rings ». I love that film !
I think she is great because she is very good at acting and she can sing very well too.
I know she is terrible at drawing and she is quite bad at playing the piano. But I don’t mind. She is my favourite actress !
In my opinion it is difficult to be a good actress. You need to be both athletic and intellectual. And you have to work hard too.
Speaking about myself I am really bad at acting because I am very shy and I am terrible at singing or dancing but I can draw very well and I am very good at playing the piano. My favourite pianist is Glen Gould.
But that ‘s all for now. I ‘ll tell you about Glen another day !! See you !
Notice that contractions are normal in English. If you don't contract, it will sound oddly formal.
The grammatical subject can be eliminated in some situations (when more than one clause has the same grammatical subject).
In English movie or book titles, all important words are capitalized.
Never place a space before English punctuation. I think that French keyboards 'autocorrect' and place spaces, so I imagine that it will be very annoying to type in English.