English Audio Request

《Could you check this out, please。 》(Dec.13th 2011)
• Everyone, good evening! I`m here in Beijing, China.
• I just arrived at noon today.
• I came back to the hotel a little while ago, and wrote a short entry in Chinese.
• (Just a moment ago, I came back to the hotel, then wrote a short Chinese entry. )
• I also rewrote my entry from the day before yesterday, shown below.
• Just the entry below is that.
• I feel I made a lot of mistakes.
• . Would you correct my mistakes, please?
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(Dec.11th 2011)
• Hello, friends! Are you enjoying your Sunday night / evening?
• I went to a beauty salon today, late in the afternoon.
• Recently (I have been feeling the need to) cut my hair, but I couldn`t go since I was lazy.
• I finally had my hair cut short today.
• I have been wearing my hair short since a long time, because it`s easier to manage (for me).
• Making up / Doing my hair and maintaining a nice hairstyle isn`t easy for me.
• Wow…when I entered that hair salon, I found there were a lot of customers.
Is it because it's the end of the year?
• And, all of hairdressers were wearing* a cute red woolen hat, so I took some quick pictures.
• After I had my hair cut, I bought a banana and tangerines came back home.
(Thanks for reading, and thanks for correcting. )