English Audio Request

(Oct 5th 2011)Last week I didn`t write any English entries.This time I`m rewriting an English entry from a year ago. Please look out for my mistakes out and correct. If you have more natural expressions, please let me know.☆THANK YOU FOR READING!☆
(Sep 30th 2010) It’s getting very late. But I will (I want to) show you some of my pictures.
1- The first picture : Look at the first picture.Sigh~~ How is it? Does it look delicious?This was a blunder I made on this morning.
2-THE 2ND AND 3RD picture
■ ”They are kids whom I have spent most of today with. “(“They are kids with whom I will spent spend most of today.”)( ”These are the kids with whom I spent the most time today. “)
Of course, should I be thankful for them?Because I feel good being with them.Look at those kids faces, there were some frowning faces, puzzled looks, funny faces, and also clenched fists .Don't they look adorable/interesting?Are you curious as to ‘what were they doing ?’Haha~~ They were excited about singing a song called “goblin pants”.” Goblin pants is strong , tough~ and strong~”
” Goblin pants is soiled, smelly and soiled~~”They were earnestly singing, complete with hand motions.Even usually mischievous kids also joined in the singing, just this time ….Of course, I sang along cheerfully with them as well.