I am rewriting my entry from last year.But I`m not sure if I have/made/ the other any mistakes.
If you find my mistakes, please correct them.♠ THANK YOU FOR YOUR READING.----(2010.9.8)Yesterday late night (Late last night) my husband returned from Beijing.He said he will take an(the) airport-bus to come home,so I didn`t need go out to the airport,I just needed to drive to the bus stop to pick him up.(=I just went to meet him at the bus stop in my car.)So when I prepared to go out, I found Betty lying still with her eyes closed in her house.
=So when I prepared went out, I found Betty lied still as closed her eyes in her house.
=So when I was preparing to go out, I found Betty lying still with her eyes closed in her house.
=As I was preparing to go out, I found Betty lying still with her eyes closed in her house. =As I was going out, I found Betty in her house lying still with her eyes closed.
Suddenly I felt something strange, and she looked ill.
=Suddenly I felt it was something strange, she looked like she was ill.
=I immediately felt it was something strange. She looked ill.
I called her, but she didn`t move a muscle. I touched her head but she didn`t open her eyes.
This was her first time not opening her eyes after I touched her.(=This is the the first time she didn`t open eyes when I touched her.)She didn`t open her eyes?
It`s the first time while live with her 10 years and 7monthes.
=It was the first time after 10 years and 7 months of living with her.
=It's the first time in the 10 years and 7 months I lived with her .
After meeting my husband, we stopped at an animal hospital.Betty was bore "Zzang-A" at that hospital 7 years and 7 months ago.Betty had/ gave birth to Zzang-A at that hospital 7 years and 7 months ago."What can I do? Betty`s eyes ~~?
Why?Really strange???This morning when I went out I didn`t find any sort of problem with her.Emmmm.....
The doctor said her crystalline lens has shrunk, it`s a very rare situation.
=The doctor said her crystalline lens had shrunk, and that it`s a very rare situation.
=The doctor gave Betty an injection in/ with grain tailings,
I pray she will soon get better,,,,She is old now, so I hope her old age passes easily!
I have to go to the hospital now with Betty.
♥ I hope that Betty will be better soon! ♥♥ ♥I hope she's all rightI wish Betty a speedy recovery.♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
Korean Audio http://audioboo.fm/boos/179130-betty-s-eyes.mp3