English Audio Request

The below entry is my last year`s entry. I think when I reread and rewite it I can recognize my mistakes and I can learn from them, therefore I am rewriting again with the help of lang-8 friends` correction三, now. Thanks again my friends!~♡~And besides, as you know, I often repeat my mistakeS. So~~If you find other mistakes, please directly point THEM out directly without mercy!Thank you everybody! (((THANKS FOR READING. PLEASE CORRECT MY MISTAKES.)))
～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～（Sep 8th 2010) Hi ~ everybody! How are you? It`s evening. Through the window, I can see it has become dark already./
( =Outside the window darkness has already fallen"）Recently, I can feel the days are becoming shorter and shorter.(=These days I can feel the days are getting shorter and shorter.)
, so.. it seems it will be cooler soon. , ( =it will probably be getting cooler soon.)I got home just now. Yeah~ it`s a little late. I`d better clean my home as quickly as possible. My husband was away for a week, so I became lazy.I neglected my duties as a housewife. *。*/ But my husband is coming back to Korea tonight, and I think cleaning the house to welcome him WOULD BE nice, WOULDN｀t it? OK!Bye~ Have a good night!