Hi~everyone! How is everyone? / How are you all? This time I`m rewriting a jouranl entry in English from my Chinese entry five days ago (from Aug 22th 2011)..Actually, it`s not easy writing English entries due to or my poor English, so every time I began to write an entry in English I used to feel nervous.( /I get nervous?/ I become nervous?/ I used to get nervous? ) Just I`m trying to ignore my feeing of nervousness, and try to(trying to) write once. Because it`s my hobby, not my obligation. ^^/ Please correct my mistakes.*♡THANK YOU VERY MUCH!♡
--(Aug 22th 2011 01:04 )---It's getting pretty(quite) late, it`s already after 1:00am. So this time I`d better talk very briefly, and I`d like to explain in more detail tomorrow,even though it will be done as tomorrow`s conditons. Today, I watched a movie with two of my good friends. It is the first time that I`ve ever seen an Indian movie,(It`s the the first Indian movie which I`ve ever seen ), and it`s title is 'Three idiots'.That movie has many musical scenes, and it`s said that`s a characteristics of India nmovies. The Indian movie industry is called 'Bollywood'(=Bombay＋hollywood ) .Taken as a whole,(=Generally), this movie was good.This is a story of three students who are studying in the famous Indian university of Engineering. These three young men constantly do unexpected things.
They agonize common problems / worries which are with nowdays young men. (=Their problems are just modern young men`s problems.)I`m uploading that movie`s preview now. If you are intersted in seeing more , you can try to clicking here.I uploaded some more movie previews and Korean Audio mp3, and also I uploaded other a few other pictures which are around the movie theater .
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时间很晚，半夜里1点多了。所以 我想简点说说今天的事情后，明天再来详细地写。只不过要看明天的情况来決定。。。。。今天我跟两个朋友一起去看了一部电影。这部电影是我第一次看的印度电影，片名 是“三个傻瓜”。影片中穿插 [chuān chā] 很多有趣的歌舞, 据说这是延续[yán xù]来的印度电影的传统。可以说“宝莱坞 [bǎo lái wù]”。总的来说，很不错。故事发生在印度最有名的科技大学里, 关于经常左冲右突//zuǒ chōng yòu tū的三个学生的学校生活。(那是在印度最有名的科技大学里，发生的三个学生大闹学校的故事。) 总的来说，很不错。他们苦恼的事情就是现代年轻人们的苦恼。 我在这儿上传预告片[yù gào piàn]。
*对， 今天的照片是那家电影院附近的情景，是我随便拍的。这些是餐厅咖啡门口的花儿，胡同等等。http://audioboo.fm/boos/447582-110822-chinese-2011-8-22-bollywood-indian-movie-bombay-hollywood-3-idiots.mp3
On the "They agonize common problems" part, I got stuck on the world "AHH-GUH-NIZE" because while it looks like it would be pronounced "AHH-GO-NIZE" it is said with a "GUH" (like the word "huh" as in "huh, I do not understand you.") sound and not a "GO" sound.
Since you said you wished to be corrected, "so every time I began to write an entry in English I used to feel nervous." you can say instead "so every time I began to write an entry in English I became nervous." but "I used to get nervous?" is also right.
"Just I`m trying to ignore my feeing of nervousness," while it is OK to start a sentence with "Just" it sounds too much like you are actually talking and not writing.
Of course "It's getting pretty(quite) late" "pretty and "quite" work there. Though I like how you put other options of things for me to say. I'm sure it's very helpful to you!
I'm too tired to correct anymore tonight, I hope these corrections help you out. Good bye for now =)
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(2011.8.22)시간이 너무 늦어 밤1시가 넘었네요. 그래서 오늘은 아주 짧게 얘기를 하고, 내일 다시 자세히 말하겠습니다. 그것도 내일 상황을 봐야겠지만 말이지요…^.^
오늘 친구 두 명과 영화를 보았습니다. 처음으로 본 인도 영화인데, 제목은 “세 얼간이”입니다.영화안에 꽤 많은 뮤지컬 장면이 삽입되어 있는데, 이는 인도영화에서 내려오는 전통이라 합니다. 볼리우드(Bollywood)인거지요. 전체적으로 꽤 괜찮은 영화였습니다. 이야기는 인도 최고의 과학기술대학에서 늘 좌충우돌하는 세 공학도의 이야기를 다룬 이야기입니다. 그들의 고민은 바로 오늘날 젊은이의 고민이지요. 여기 예고편을 올리겠습니다.
* 좀더 관심 있는 분은 다음을 클릭해 보셔요. http://bangbangstory.wordpress.com/2011/08/22/ 사진과 한글 낭독 녹음 mp3를 모두 여기에 올렸습니다. 오늘 사진은 극장 주변의 모습을 편하게 찍어 올린 것입니다. 식당, 까페 입구, 작은 골목, 길거리 등입니다.
http://audioboo.fm/boos/447576-110822-korean-2011-8-22-bollywood-indian-movie-bombay-hollywood-3-idiots.mp3