If you find my mistakes in English, please correct and record it. THANK YOU!!
Apr 26th 2010
<get a perm with sister>^o^/.
• Today at noon l met my younger sister at/in (both are good) a beauty salon.
• Because I would liked to get a perm.
• So yesterday I called her asked go to get a perm together
• BUT~~~ today I was late by a half hour.
• On the contrary she arrivedhalf an hour early .
• Because she took the subway, I drove car going out , and I was caught in traffic jam
• Anyway ,we got a perm together. So fun!
• And I had to leave from there at the first ,because i have a class in the afternoon.
• I feel sorry for my sister.
• And I am so thankful for my sister.
• She allways helps me, she is very generous for me.
• I feel some sorry her.
• Sometimes I feel like she looks like an older sister who used to take care me.
• Sorry and thanks for my younger sister!
• Good night my sister~(~.~) Have sweet and good dream
**Time lesson: **
Here are some examples of how to use time in English:
1-I was late by one hour.
2-I was 3 minutes early to the subway.
3-I always get on the bus at five. (Here you get on at exactly 5)
4-I always get on the bus by five. (Here you can get on at 3 or 4 but you are in the bus at 5.)
http://www.lang-8.com/117072/journals/458828
• 今天又下雨 了。 我感觉今年春天下雨的次数格外多。
• 前天我跟妹妹约好了今天中午在美容院见面。
• 妹妹坐地铁去,要花20分钟。 其实我坐地铁也很方便,不过今天还是得开车去。
• 因为今天下午我还要去学校上课(一种爱好性课)。
• 怕时间来不及就开车出去, 结果路上堵车了更迟了。哎呀~~真不好意思~!
• 我妹妹早来半个小时,我却晚到半个多小时。
• 所以我到的时候,她已经开始了烫发了。
• 这个美容院是我朋友介绍的。
• 规模小,服务的人员只有两个人(老板和服务员),可是经常客人很多,所以必须要预约。(所以必须提前预约。)
• 我估计这儿生意好的原因有2~3个。
• 第一:手艺高且妥当,第二:价格便宜 ,第三:服务态度很好。
• 当然这此以外还有吧。生意的成功与否是根据她的技术水平、诚恳态度,以及人与人之间的相处尤其重要!
• 下边的文章是从lang-8 朋友 把‘Frank ‘的日记抄写来的。
• 因为我感觉这个文章描写一个小的乡村的感觉很好。
• 所以我在这儿试试用韩文来 翻译写的,(我试试翻译成韩文),
• 也许能帮学韩文的朋友们的阅读。
• 那么~~学中文韩文的朋友们都可以一起一边比较比较 可以欣赏。
• 所以我希望 朋友们一起欣赏两种语言的感觉。
http://www.lang-8.com/117072/journals/458734