English Audio Request

~~<2010.12.12>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
<Touched by a Birthday Celebration>
• I haven't written an entry in English for a long time.It's been about 5 days.

• I wrote a Chinese entry just a moment ago.（I wrote an entry in Chinese just moment ago.）
• The subject was '2010 Internet Topics: The Best of the Best."
• I found it on the internet news.
• This photo shows a dog`s complicated mind/(feeling) on its face.
（This photo shows a dog's complicated expression/look.)
（This photo shows a dog`s expression. )
（This photo shows a surprised dog's face.）

• This dog was touched by his birthday celebration.
• So on the dog's face shows pleasure, smile, impression, appreciation..
（The look on the dog's face shows pleasure, a smile, appreciation, and very complicated feeling. ).
（so on his face is a mixed expression of pleasure, happiness, surprise and appreciation..)
（So on the photo shows a pleasant, impressed, and appreciated smiling dog.）

• In the front of him own his celebrating birthday, he shows very complicated mind, smiling, crying, happy, and embarrassment at the same time.
（In front of the dog was his birthday cake. He is expressing many different emotions at the same time.)（ In the front him is his birthday celebration.)
• It was the reason that it attracted everyone's attention
（The dog's expression was the reason that this photo attracted everyone's attention.)

=☆☆=lang-8 friends explanations ================================
☆ If it has been 5 days then I would use
("It's already been 5 days").

If it was close to being 5 days then I would use one of the other two examples.
("It's been about 5 days."),
("It's almost been 5 days)
☆ moved and touched are both right - pick one.

☆ If you don't know the gender of a dog it's okay to use "he" until you know.

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4. 생일상 받고 감격한 강아지
기쁨, 미소, 감동, 감사 등 복잡한 심경을 '표정'으로 말한 애완견 한 마리가 슈퍼스타로 떠올랐다. 생일상을 받은 이 개는 대단히 복잡한 표정인데, 웃음과 울음 기쁨과 미안함, 겸연쩍음 등이 하나의 얼굴에 있다는 것이 이 개가 주목을 받은 이유다.
*KOrean Audio=> http://audioboo.fm/boos/235935-.mp3

2010年网上的话题 ‘ 冠军之中的冠军----------------
4-由于收到生日礼物而感动的小狗。: 把高兴，微笑，感动，感谢，等等很复杂的心情用‘表情’来表达出的 一只宠物狗被成为了明星。 收到生日礼物的这只小狗的表情是非常复杂的 ，笑和哭 还含有 高兴 和 抱歉、不好意思等等，都一起堆在它的一张脸上，这点就是它被关注的 主要原因。