English Audio Request

<Would you correct my mistakes, if you have a free time?>

Hello everyone!
It`s rainning today.
However, it`s raining on and off from yesterday night till now, so it`s humid so it makes us annoyed .
I`m writing my entry from three days ago again ,
because I don`t know which are incorrect eventhough I feel I made a lot of mistakes.
It/This entry/ is very long, it`s not easy to correct all of my mistakes,
therefore you can correct just only one or two mistakes for me.

This entry is made in order to practice the description of my pictures,
so if you would like to see these pictures, click here.

===<No 1:Departing from Seoul /<One Night Two days>========
• It was a sudden proposal and decision, and we three women departed from Seoul,
listening to music of "DepartDre" sung by 김동률 August 9, 2012.
• Watching mountain ridges on the highway,
we hit the road.

•We were eating walnut cookies we bought on the highway rest area....
Would you/Why don`t you?/ enjoy my friend`s elegant and skillfull driving with the flowing music ....?
• Even though sometimes the highway was crowded with cars of summer vacation..
when I turned away my head and see the white clouds on the sky ,
and be connected mountain ridgelines, I felt being relieved..
•Stopped by the foot of a mountain and had a wild edible greens set menu for lunch ...

*We sat on the floor where the wind was cooler than the electric fan."
("We sat on the floor where the wind coming through was cooler than the electric fan." )
("We sat on the floor where the wind coming through the open windows was cooler than the electric fan.")
stimulated[aroused] our appetite diverse with wild edible greens!

• Before...... ^^/ A lot of wild edible greens on the table,~~
After...^.*/ Just there are empty dishes when after women`s hands passed ....kkk...
• Finished lunch, and then departed for 월정사?
•Then why don`t we walk along the road of a thousand years?
Then let`s walk along the road of a thousand years?

< Description Of My Pictures(One Night Two Days) >
===(Description of my pictures: No.2)
•You can walk clasping your hands behind your back...
•For old grandmas, using a walking stick is more comfortable..
•It's also good when a couple that has been walking a long way together talk about their past long time together...

•It`s also nice when a young couple who has a long way ahead to walk together in the future, push their baby carriage

•It`s great when walking with your neighbors with bursting laugh with crowd ...

•If not?
•Rather, take and hold your shoes and try to feel soil's touching?feeling? /
that ticking your sole of the foot.
•Block off the blazing sunlight squeeze into leaves with a parasol....
•Look at the sky!
and over there...Can you see those snewy branches spread out
•Try to take a smooth turn once...
•Trees will also follow you turn
•Do you see those white clouds between branches?
•Wow..The 600 aged fir tree were fall down

======< Describtion Of My Pictures / The Third >=========
I heard a stream sounds, so I turned my eyes.
•Ah, it`s a vally`s stream.
•Even though it have been droughty long time (while?) this summer,
here, it`s flowing (stream ?) as usual. ...
•We stopped by the traditional tea house in 월정사,
•We are having a tea time with the stream water under the our feet.
•The teas of fruits of schisandra chinensis`s and Japanese apricot,
it has?/was?/ really beautiful color.
•We are having a rest time with seeing the clear and cool valley stream under our feet.
•These (tea ?) glasses were filled with nice scent caused?/ by?/ a few of floating
pine nuts ...
~~（월정사）~~~~~~
I coudn`t take picturem, because my phone was out of work. Pity!

==<Description Of My Pictures(No.4) >==========
•It became darker and darker.
•The three of us are going to an outdoor club in the mountain on a summer night.
•in the hot summer night,
with a cool breeze...
and delicious sausages and fruits..

•Oh, it`s a fun and festive mood!
•The night is over
and
it's early morning on the mountain....
•One of my friends is making the morning coffee
and I am peeling fruits.

•Huhuhuh,
Today we're having a simple American style breakfast
with nice smelling bread, fragrant coffee and fresh fruits.
•^^ Good bye~!!
•Now it`s time to pack up our bags!
•Oooh? What is it?
•Is it a dragonfly on our car antenna?
•Do you know the name of this flower?
•It`s called “족두리 꽃“ which a Korean bride puts on her head on her wedding day.

•Uh: Hi: Hi: Ha: Ha`
•Have you experienced the feeling of flying?"
( "Do you know what it's like to fly?")

•If you try this, this is what flying feels like.
•Having a walk in the morning along a road with fantastic flowers.
•Now we are heading to 봉평 , "the house of 이효석`s birth " ....

Arrived at 봉평.
•Buckwheat jelly rice, buckwheat pancakes, buckwheat noodles (makguksu)
stimulate[arouse] our appetite with them..
•On the way, we found a grandma who was making durra pancakes.
The young and cute woman near her is her daughter-in-law.
•We bought buckwheat steamed bread...
delicious durra pancakes and buckwheat pancakes that the grandma made

•durra pancakes
buckwheat pancakes ..
•Cheer up with makkŏlli(raw rice wine )! ^.^/
•"The house of 이효석`s birth " " ....
•We couldn`t see any buckwheat flowers since it`s too early in the season ,
•But we can see the white buckwheat flowers when autumn comes....

==<Description Of My Pictures (The last ) >=========
•Head to Seoul............................!!!
•On the way home..
•Returning home...
•I couldn't take pictures of a view of a green rice field in 여주 because my phone camera was suddenly out of order.(/suddenly would not work)/.
Pity!
•So...now..
•I`d like to conclude time.
•Time was very short but I was so busy with friends for one night two days.
•Now we are waiting the winter`s one nigh ttwodays.
•I hope my friends` healthy and happy!
and hope, this three women`s "One night Two days" will be go on till seventy years and eighty years old..