Note to recorder:
Natural speed please
Hi ! I'm Rose Hershley . I'm thirteen and a half , I'll be fourteen in two months, April the 1st. I've got a half sister who is 2 years older than me , I've got 1 cat and a kitten , a baby cat called Garfield. I was born in Bristol but now , we live in London. Our address is 21 Oxford Avenue. I love swimming , my favourite subject at school is PE because we go to the swimming pool every Monday but I don't like Technology because I am not good at DIY. I am keen on listening to music and surfing on the net , I like cooking too , my favourite recipe ? Chocolate Brownies , everybody says that it is absolutely scrumptious ! Maybe, I'll be a cook when I grow up !
Where you say you don't like technology because you're not good at DIY - it's possible you meant to say 'not good at it'. DIY is 'do it yourself', and would make more sense for being not good at, say, shop class than Tech. Also, I'd caution you against using your real address online for anything public, especially if you're a minor.