Please, speak slowly. Pause after each sentence. This text is for the children in 4th grade.
Dear Penfriend,
Here is a picture of me, my sister, my mum and my dad. My dad is called Ben. He is tall and thin. He's got short black hair and brown eyes. My mum is called Sally. She is tall and thin. She's got short red hair and green eyes. My sister is called Mandy. She is funny.
She is five years old. She's got long blonde hair and blue eyes.
I've got short brown hair and blue eyes. Can you see me? Can you see my sister, my mum and my dad?
What about your mum, dad, brothers and sisters?
Write soon,
Tim
Oh, thank you so so much. It makes such a huge difference when a native speaker reads it. Thank you!