Thanks in advance for your help ! Could you read it as if you were telling the story to a child ? Normal speed would be perfect.
Once upon a time there was a little girl called Goldilocks. She had long curly golden hair.
One day Goldilocks was walking in the forest. She saw a house and knocked on the door. She went inside but nobody was there.
Goldilocks saw three bowls on the table. She was hungry.
“This porridge is too hot! This porridge is too cold! This porridge is just right!” Goldilocks ate all the porridge.
Goldilocks was tired now. “This chair is too big! This chair is too big, too! This chair is just right!” But the chair broke.
Goldilocks was very tired. She went upstairs. “This bed is too hard! This bed is too soft! This bed is just right!”. She fell asleep.
Soon, the bears came home and they saw that someone had been eating their porridge, sitting on their chairs.
They went to the bedroom and saw that Goldilocks was sleeping in baby bear's bed.
Goldilocks woke up and saw the three bears. “Help!” she shouted.
She ran downstairs and into the forest. She never came back again.
It is PERFECT ! Thank you so much for your help !