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English Audio Request

maiphuonghaha
340 Words / 1 Recordings / 1 Comments
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Topic: Living in large cities today poses many problems for people. What are these problems? Should governments encourage more people to live in smaller towns?

Model answer:

More and more people live in cities today than at any point in the past, and this trend will likely continue in the future. This has resulted in many problems including extreme overcrowding, and governments should take measures to make living outside cities more attractive.

There are a wide range of drawbacks associated with the rise of modern cities, but one of the most obvious issues is related to population density. The large number of people crammed into a relatively small area has caused expensive housing, increased traffic and severe pollution. For example, apartment prices in mega-cities, such as Tokyo and New York, have soared to the point where only the wealthiest inhabitants can afford decent living standards. Regardless of financial status, all city dwellers have to deal with more and more traffic jams as the population increases while the area of cities remains fixed. Finally, all these people living and travelling in one place puts a tremendous strain on the environment and some cities, like Beijing in China, have become dangerously polluted.

In my opinion, governments have a duty to encourage citizens to move to more rural areas. If cities continue to expand unabated, then the above problems will only get worse. We might one day find ourselves living in densely packed, heavily polluted cities that resemble scenes from a dystopian science fiction film. In order to prevent this from happening, the government can give tax breaks to companies that choose to locate offices and production facilities outside the city. This will provide more jobs for people who are willing to live in the countryside.

In conclusion, the concerns related to overcrowding in cities can and should be somewhat countered by governments incentivising living in rural areas. If this is done then we may still face problems related to cities in the future, but at least they will not be as serious.

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    Topic: Living in large cities today poses many problems for people. What are these problems? Should governments encourage more people to live in smaller towns?

    Model answer:

    More and more people live in cities today than at any point in the past, and this trend will likely continue into the future. This has resulted in many problems, including extreme overcrowding, and governments should take measures to make living outside cities more attractive.

    There are a wide range of drawbacks associated with the rise of modern cities, but one of the most obvious issues is related to population density. The large number of people crammed into a relatively small area has caused expensive housing, increased traffic and severe pollution. For example, apartment prices in mega-cities, such as Tokyo and New York, have soared to the point where only the wealthiest inhabitants can afford decent living standards. Regardless of financial status, all city dwellers have to deal with more and more traffic jams as the population increases while the area of cities remains fixed. Finally, all these people living and travelling in one place puts a tremendous strain on the environment and some cities, like Beijing in China, have become dangerously polluted.

    In my opinion, governments have a duty to encourage citizens to move to more rural areas. If cities continue to expand unabated, then the above problems will only get worse. We might one day find ourselves living in densely packed, heavily polluted cities that resemble scenes from a dystopian science fiction film. In order to prevent this from happening, the government can give tax breaks to companies that choose to locate offices and production facilities outside the city. This will provide more jobs for people who are willing to live in the countryside.

    In conclusion, the concerns related to overcrowding in cities can and should be somewhat countered by governments incentivising living in rural areas. If this is done then we may still face problems related to cities in the future, but at least they will not be as serious.

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maiphuonghaha
Aug. 23, 2020

Thank you!

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