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English Audio Request

Tiztiz
102 Words / 2 Recordings / 3 Comments
Note to recorder:

It's the lyrics of my next song I´ll record this saturday in studio.
If you find some mistakes in The text please tell me.
Thanks.

The Time has come to say goodbye
After all those years gone by
So many feelings will remind
So many memories in my mind

And I wish You The best
For your Life and The rest
Let me a pic And a smile
I promise to laught not to cry

A brand new start Will begin
To thousands miles from here my friend
Another life another chance
To bring someone else in your danse

They put the sky into your eyes
The let The sun shine bright behind
So When ill feel alone and sad
I ´ll remember You and your smile

Recordings

  • Wish You The best ( recorded by lgarner ), Southern

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    The Time has come to say goodbye
    After all those years gone by
    So many feelings will remind
    So many memories in my mind

    And I wish You The best
    For your Life and The rest
    Let me a pic And a smile
    I promise to laught not to cry

    A brand new start Will begin
    Two thousands miles from here my friend
    Another life another chance
    To bring someone else in your dance

    They put the sky into your eyes
    They let The sun shine bright behind
    So When I feel alone and sad
    I
    ´ll remember You and your smile

  • Wish You The best ( recorded by Rebalatrix ), American, Northern Central USA

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    The Time has come to say goodbye
    After all those years gone by
    So many feelings will remind
    So many memories in my mind

    And I wish You The best
    For your Life and The rest
    Let me a pic And a smile
    I promise to laugh not to cry

    A brand new start Will begin
    To thousands miles from here my friend
    Another life another chance
    To bring someone else into your dance

    They put the sky into your eyes
    They let The sun shine bright behind
    So When ill feel alone and sad
    I ´ll remember You and your smile

Comments

Rebalatrix
Sept. 9, 2016

"So When ill feel alone and sad" this line does not make sense in English.
"So When I feel alone and sad" seems to be what you meant.

Tiztiz
Sept. 10, 2016

Thanks for the record ! I made a mistake, I wanted to write "I´ll feel" (i Will feel).

Rebalatrix
Sept. 10, 2016

I stick to my original recommendation.
"In references to the future with when, we use the present simple or the present perfect in the when-clause, not the future with shall and will:" (http://dictionary.cambridge.org/us/grammar/british-grammar/when)

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