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Pearly_Bean1
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I will never forget the day I met that girl, the day that I started all of this chaos of sorrow, pain and tragedies for the girl I love even in this life or after lives.

She was a little fairy with a pure heart and simple mind, not specifically good at anything, wasn't outstanding in beauty or talent. I caught her eye kept tracking me so much but I didn't kept my mind in it. Then one day, she run to the and showed me her lines of her hand, told me that the God of love and marriage had decided her to be my bride someday. I got terribly angry at that time. In my eyes, a such great, gifted, born inti a patrician God family like me was not able to met a so bad luck like engagement with a trivial fairy like her. I went to find and asked the God of love and marriage if it were tje truth and where he got that crazy idea from. I meant to require him to change his arrangement for my marriage. I should have had a better future with a better wife. But he just shook his head and laughed at me scornfully :
- You have too much confidence than you need. A girl like Ann can fix your life. At least, she could change you into something better.
I have to admit that I even hadn't known Ann's name until him said it out.
I was totally lost my mind. I took my sword and cut a line across Ann's hand. I didn't cut off her hand but her life. I took her life a way. I just meant to cut off only her line of love but I did with all lines, including the lines of her life. That made Ann's longevity end immediately. It was the silliest thing I had done in my life.
Ann died but there was no disappointment in the God of love and marriage's face. He just had more sure about his decision.
After Anns dead, I was punished to live in nine lives become a God again. My parents weren't able to do anything to decrease that punishment.

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  • The girl I love ( recorded by TheLilyLiveredDuke ), American

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    I will never forget the day I met that girl, the day that I started all of this chaos of sorrow, pain and tragedy for the girl I love, even in this life after.

    She was a little fairy with a pure heart and simple mind, not specifically good at anything, wasn't outstanding in beauty or talent. I caught her eye tracking me, but I didn't think about it. Then one day, she ran to me and showed me the lines on her hand, told me that the God of love and marriage had decided for her to be my bride someday. I got terribly angry at the time. In my eyes, such a great, gifted person in a patrician godly family like me was not able to met such a bad-luck inducing engagement with a trivial fairy like her. I went to find and ask the God of love and marriage if it was the truth, and where he gotten that crazy idea from. I meant to require him to change his arrangement for my marriage. I should have a better future with a better wife. But he just shook his head and laughed at me scornfully.
    "You have too much confidence than you need. A girl like Ann can fix your life. At least, she could change you into something better."
    I have to admit that I even ha
    dn't known Ann's name until he said it our loud.
    I totally lost my mind. I took my sword and cut a line across Ann's hand. I didn't cut off her hand
    , but her life. I took her life away. I just meant to cut off her line of love, but I cut all lines, including the lines of her life. That made Ann's longevity end immediately. It was the silliest thing I had done in my life.
    Ann died, but there was no disappointment in the God of love and marriage's face. He was just more sure in his decision.
    After Ann's dead, I was punished to live nine lives to become a God again. My parents weren't able to do anything to decrease that punishment.

  • The girl I love ( recorded by ucjoycom ), Southern California

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    I will never forget the day I met that girl, the day that I started all of this chaos of sorrow, pain, and tragedies for the girl I love.

    She was a little fairy with a pure heart and a simple mind. She wasn't particularly good at anything; she wasn't outstanding in beauty or talent. I caught her staring at me often, but I didn't focus on it. Then one day, she ran to me, showed me the lines of her hand, and told me that the God of Love and Marriage had decided to make her my bride someday. I got terribly angry at the time. In my eyes, a such great, gifted man, born into a noble God family like me was not able to marry someone of such little importance.

    I went to find the God of Love and Marriage and asked him if what she said was true, and where he got that crazy idea from. I told him to change his arrangement for my marriage. I should have had a better future with a better wife. But he just shook his head and laughed at me scornfully, "You have much more confidence than you need. A girl like Ann can fix your life. At least, she could change you into something better."

    I have to admit that I didn't even know Ann's name until he said it out loud. I lost my mind. I took out my sword and cut a line across Ann's hand. I didn't cut off her hand, but her life. I took her life away. I meant to only cut off only her line of love but I cut all the lines, including the lines of her life. Ann's longevity ended immediately. It was the silliest thing I had done in my life.

    Ann died but there was no disappointment in the God of Love and Marriage's face. He was just more sure about his decision. After Ann's death, my punishment was to live nine lives as a God again. My parents weren't able to do anything to decrease that punishment.

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