Please help me fix the grammar and vocabulary mistakes. Perhaps some words are weird.
Don't be too fast, please.
I will never forget the day I met that girl, the day that I started all of this chaos of sorrow, pain and tragedies for the girl I love even in this life or after lives.
She was a little fairy with a pure heart and simple mind, not specifically good at anything, wasn't outstanding in beauty or talent. I caught her eye kept tracking me so much but I didn't kept my mind in it. Then one day, she run to the and showed me her lines of her hand, told me that the God of love and marriage had decided her to be my bride someday. I got terribly angry at that time. In my eyes, a such great, gifted, born inti a patrician God family like me was not able to met a so bad luck like engagement with a trivial fairy like her. I went to find and asked the God of love and marriage if it were tje truth and where he got that crazy idea from. I meant to require him to change his arrangement for my marriage. I should have had a better future with a better wife. But he just shook his head and laughed at me scornfully :
- You have too much confidence than you need. A girl like Ann can fix your life. At least, she could change you into something better.
I have to admit that I even hadn't known Ann's name until him said it out.
I was totally lost my mind. I took my sword and cut a line across Ann's hand. I didn't cut off her hand but her life. I took her life a way. I just meant to cut off only her line of love but I did with all lines, including the lines of her life. That made Ann's longevity end immediately. It was the silliest thing I had done in my life.
Ann died but there was no disappointment in the God of love and marriage's face. He just had more sure about his decision.
After Anns dead, I was punished to live in nine lives become a God again. My parents weren't able to do anything to decrease that punishment.