Natural Speed please
Every Tuesday, I get up at seven o’clock. I take a shower and I get dressed. At half past seven, I have breakfast. Then, I brush my teeth and I go to school by car with my mother at eight o’clock. I get to school at twenty past eight and I have Assembly until half past eight. Then, I have lessons from twenty to nine until ten past twelve. I have English, History, Mathematics and Art. Fortunately, I have a break from twenty past ten to half past ten! After that, from ten past twelve to twenty past one, it’s lunchtime: I eat at the canteen with my friends. In the afternoon, I have PE from twenty past one to twenty past three so I finish school at twenty past three. I take the bus at half past three and I go back home at four o’clock. I have a snack, I do my homework and I meet my friends at the park. Finally, I have dinner at half past six, I watch TV and I go to bed at nine o’clock.
canteen (we never use canteen, may I suggest cafeteria?)
In America we also do not signify time in the same way French do. Instead of half past seven, we say 7:30 (spelled out seven thirty). People would get confused here if you said half past seven.