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Viajé a Puno en enero de este año con mi hermano. Nosotros viajamos por ómnibus. Nosotros tomamos 2 ómnibus. Iniciamos el viaje desde Lima hasta Arequipa con el ómnibus Cruz del Sur, cuando llegamos a Arequipa tomamos el ómnibus San Cristobal, que nos llevo a nuestro destino que es Puno. En Puno fuimos a la casa de mis tíos para quedarnos 2 semanas, durante esa semana también fuimos a visitar a mis abuelos. Al día siguiente fuimos al centro comercial que está muy lejos de la casa de mis tíos. Allí compramos unos zapatos y una casaca. Regresamos a la casa a las 2 de la tarde. El único problema que tuve cuando viajé, es que me dio una fuerte gripe. Pero de todas maneras el viaje estuvo genial.
I traveled to Puno last January with my brother. We traveled by bus. We took two buses. First, we went from Lima of Arequipa with "Cruz del Sur". And then we went from Arequipa of Puno with "San Cristobal". We stayed in the house's aunt and uncle. Well, In those days we went to visit to my grandparents. Then we went to buy some shoes and jackets at the supermarket. The supermarket is very fair my house's aunt and uncle. After we went back to house's aunt and uncle at about 2 o'clock pm. I had a one problem : I had flu when I arrived there anyway the trip was good.
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I traveled to Puno last January with my brother. We traveled by bus. We took two buses. First, we went from Lima to Arequipa on the "Cruz del Sur" bus line. When we got to Arequipa, we took the "San Cristobal" bus line to our destination in Puno. We stayed at my aunt and uncle's house for two weeks, and during that time we went to visit my grandparents. The next day, we went to the commercial center, which is very far from my aunt and uncle's house. We went to buy some shoes and a jacket. We returned to the house at about 2 pm. The only problem I had during the trip was that it gave me a bad flu. But the trip was good anyway.